Wow! That looks a
lot more realistic. It has darkened the room down quite a bit though. It could use a bit more indirect lighting (bounce light) to give it a bit lighter feel. Or is the overhead light fixture supposed to be on? If so, that would typically be a stronger light than the others.
A small hint on the bedside lights which is personal preference. They usually have two bulbs in them, one each side. This makes the fan of light broader, i.e.
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Last thing. Is the middle section of curtain/net meant to be a plastic sheet? The upper folds have a shine which makes me think of a plastic shower curtain. If it is supposed to be a fabric net, you should remove the shininess.